Kia orana Maraea, Wow! What a fantastic effort, your mahi looks amazing. Clearly set out and completed to high standard. Your NZ create is well designed and original. As always you have put 100% into your writing and it is well structured using paragraphs. Remember to keep rereading it out loud slowly to make sure it flows, you are moving ahead quickly with your writing now you have to focus on Intermediate expectations, like being a critical editor of your work. Ask yourself, what have I already said? Does this sentence need to be moved somewhere else to fit in better? How can I use more specific language to explain my thinking? Keep up the fantastic effort.
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Kia orana Maraea, Wow! What a fantastic effort, your mahi looks amazing. Clearly set out and completed to high standard. Your NZ create is well designed and original. As always you have put 100% into your writing and it is well structured using paragraphs. Remember to keep rereading it out loud slowly to make sure it flows, you are moving ahead quickly with your writing now you have to focus on Intermediate expectations, like being a critical editor of your work. Ask yourself, what have I already said? Does this sentence need to be moved somewhere else to fit in better? How can I use more specific language to explain my thinking? Keep up the fantastic effort.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the awesome feedback Whaea Sharlee I will do my best to succeed! I appreciate the feedback!
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