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Friday, 19 March 2021

My Space Writing!

 Date:19.3.21

RT:To Describe characters thoughts and what their feeling

NL:To describe


My Space Writing!

(You look outside the window of my spaceship and I see…)

I look outside the window of my spaceship and I see a HUGE galaxy right infront of me!

I can see the earth and it reminds me of a swirl of wet paint on my piece of artwork.

I can also see the sun and it looks like a HUMUNGOS ball of flame it sets fire to my eyes.

Their are so many astroids just floating outside in space as if they were levitating rocks just being guided by a ghost gives me the shivers and makes me feel haunted~. 

Jupiter reminds me of my nana’s floor boards just screecching as I walk on it, it also reminds me of the time i tried to sneak and grab food while everyone was sleeping but all I could hear was

SCREECH SCREECH!!!!!!

Saturn’s ring reminds me of a hola hoop just swinging around me as if I was the center





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