Date:19.3.21
RT:To Describe characters thoughts and what their feeling
NL:To describe
My Space Writing!
(You look outside the window of my spaceship and I see…)
I look outside the window of my spaceship and I see a HUGE galaxy right infront of me!
I can see the earth and it reminds me of a swirl of wet paint on my piece of artwork.
I can also see the sun and it looks like a HUMUNGOS ball of flame it sets fire to my eyes.
Their are so many astroids just floating outside in space as if they were levitating rocks just being guided by a ghost gives me the shivers and makes me feel haunted~.
Jupiter reminds me of my nana’s floor boards just screecching as I walk on it, it also reminds me of the time i tried to sneak and grab food while everyone was sleeping but all I could hear was
SCREECH SCREECH!!!!!!
Saturn’s ring reminds me of a hola hoop just swinging around me as if I was the center
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