Before I edited the paragraph in my writing
After I edited the paragraph in my writing!
This week I have been doing free writing in my journal! Today I have been learning about Editing, and today I got a paragraph in my free writing and I edited it to make it more interesting! As you can see above the writing there are 2 paragraphs that are the same but edited! The first paragraph contains what my writing looked like before I edited it, and the other paragraph is what it looked like after I edited it. Where I have highlighted is where I did the editing for e.g: scared face - fear upon their faces.
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