Kia ora Maraea, wow what an amazing couple of poems you have created. I thought your idea to create the outline of a house was original and looked very striking. Your Hid and Seek poem was written beautifully. Nice work using the idea of not finding anyone repeated in each new word, this gave your poem a sense of pace and rhythm. Excellent work getting some maths practise in, nice job Maraea!
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Kia ora Maraea, wow what an amazing couple of poems you have created. I thought your idea to create the outline of a house was original and looked very striking. Your Hid and Seek poem was written beautifully. Nice work using the idea of not finding anyone repeated in each new word, this gave your poem a sense of pace and rhythm. Excellent work getting some maths practise in, nice job Maraea!
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