Kia ora Maraea, what an original and super fun idea to help clear the rubbish from around our area! You have thought about how to engage the community by making it a game that anyone can participate in. You used TinkerCAD effectively to design the shape of your bins and adding the smiley face is a nice touch. You explained how your creation would work and how to play well, the audience would be able follow your instructions. Maybe using numbered points within your writing to clearly show the steps would be effective. These numbered instructions could be the sign you use as a display next to the bins so everyone reads what to do. Thank you for the commitment you have shown to your learning and coming to our Meets. Great effort all round this week!
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Kia ora Maraea, what an original and super fun idea to help clear the rubbish from around our area! You have thought about how to engage the community by making it a game that anyone can participate in. You used TinkerCAD effectively to design the shape of your bins and adding the smiley face is a nice touch. You explained how your creation would work and how to play well, the audience would be able follow your instructions. Maybe using numbered points within your writing to clearly show the steps would be effective. These numbered instructions could be the sign you use as a display next to the bins so everyone reads what to do. Thank you for the commitment you have shown to your learning and coming to our Meets. Great effort all round this week!
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