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Thursday, 30 May 2019

Autumn leaf rain

I was learning to use descriptive words.
I enjoyed throwing the leaf in the air. The part i hate was when someone threw the leafs up i got hit with a rock.

Have you ever done this like my class?

Autumn






The crunch of the leafs are like rice bubbles.
The colours of the leafs are like a sunset to dawn.
As the leafs Russell hard through the wind it's like birds whistling.

By Maraea

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